Saturday, April 23, 2011

Chapter 3- the cause and effect

The Black Death

201000955 Hannah Kim

 

             There is an epidemic disease called plague. There is also a very famous historical event 'the black death', related to this notorious disease. This event affected numerous people and also the societies of Europe. Almost 50 percent of people in Europe died because of this disease and also at the end led to the abolition of social status.

 

             To talk about the diases plague itself, there are various kinds and for the black death, 3 kinds of plagues were mixed together. These three kinds were Bubonic Plague, Pneumonic Plague, and Septiuemic Plague and all of these had different symptoms. The Bobonic Plague was spread by fleas living on bodies of infected rats. People felt flu-like symptoms when they have this plague. The mortality rate was around 75% and most people died within seventy-two hours. The next plague, the Pneumonic Plague caused the lungs to fill up with fluid. Because of this, patients infected this disease cough a lot and spit blood. Its mortality rate was 90% to 95%.  Most people died within forty-eight hours.  Lastly, the Septiuemic Plague attacked the blood causing blood to clot in  veins.  The mortality rate was about 100% and people often died within twenty-four hours. This notorious disease took place where there is not sanitary and spread by water and air.

 

             Around 1320, this plague was started to spread and it blanked all over the Europe, including England, France, Germany and so on. The major reason of the spread was terrible sanitation. In this medieval period, in towns, many people owned pigs and they let the pigs go out and roam the road. Therefore, the whole city became really dirty. In addition, the water was also polluted because the river where the water came from were all used for industrial purposes and polluted. The classes that were struck by this plague the most were plebeians and slaves. According to one research, it is considered that the population of one city decreased by 1/3.

             This event brought enormous effects both to individuals and societies. First, the price of crops increased dramatically because there were lack of people who can culture crops. Although not so many noble people were infected, the farmers died dramatically, therefore there were a lot of farm lands that no one took care of. This, at the end, let to abolition of the social class because the right of farmers got higher and higher.

 

             In conclusion, you can see major two effects that the notorious disease, the black plague brought to Europe nations. Because of this fatal disease which were cause because of bad sanitary conditions, there were very few farmers who were alive and raised their crops and as a result, the price of crop increased dramatically. And because of this, the right of them raised and the social class was bolished.

 

2 comments:

  1. Even though plague is very famous(?) disease, I was very surprised that there are even three kinds of plagues. So, it was the most interesting part of your story.

    I have a question for you ^^

    Almost 50 percent of people in Europe died because of this disease -> When? or is it still killing people thesedays as well?

    And to improve your essay, I would suggest...I'm not so sure that three kinds of plagues are essential to introduce from the beginning. When I read your essay, firstly I was surprised and then I a little bit lost focus when I read plague
    s cause and effect. Because this essay should be "Cause and Effect" essay, you can diminish the amount of information about three kinds but put more effort to build connection with next paragraphs and put some more details into your causes and effects. I just looked at your paragraph's length, and .. I realized that you should put more details into your causes and effects because that should be the point of this essay !

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  2. Hannah Kim- rewriteMay 2, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    The Black Death
    201000955 Hannah Kim

    There is a famous epidemic disease called plague. Also, a very famous historical event 'the black death' was related to this notorious disease. This event affected numerous people in the European nations and also the whole system of society of Europe. Almost 50 percent of people in Europe died because of this disease and also at the end led to the abolition of social status.

    To talk about the diases plague itself, there are various kinds and for the black death, 3 kinds of plagues were mixed together. These three kinds were Bubonic Plague, Pneumonic Plague, and Septiuemic Plague and all of these had different symptoms. The Bobonic Plague was spread by fleas living on bodies of infected rats. People felt flu-like symptoms when they have this plague. The next plague, the Pneumonic Plague caused the lungs to fill up with fluid. Because of this, patients infected this disease cough a lot and spit blood. Lastly, the Septiuemic Plague attacked the blood causing blood to clot in veins. This notorious disease took place where there is not sanitary and spread by water and air.

    Around 1320, this plague was started to spread and it blanked all over the Europe, including England, France, Germany and so on. The major reason of the spread was the terrible sanitation. In this medieval period, in towns, many people owned pigs and they let the pigs go out and roam the road to search for their food. Therefore, the whole city became extremely dirty. Not only that, the water that flowed around the city, where normal people such as farmers resided, was also polluted because the river where the water came from were all used for industrial purposes and polluted. The classes that were struck by this plague the most were, of course, plebeians and slaves. According to one research, it is considered that the population of one city decreased by 1/3.

    This event brought enormous effects both on individuals and societies. First, the price of crops increased dramatically because there were lack of people who could culture crops. Although not so many noble people were infected since they could remain sanitary, the farmers died dramatically, therefore there were a lot of farm lands that no one took care of. This, at the end, let to the abolition of the social class because the right of farmers got higher and these farmers asserted that it was unfair only those nobel people did not work and stayed in healthy.

    In conclusion, you can see major two effects that this notorious disease, the black plague brought to European nations. Because of this fatal disease which were caused because of bad sanitary conditions, there were very few farmers who were alive and raised their crops and as a result, the price of crop increased dramatically. And after all, the right of plebeians raised and the social class was abolished.

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